Funny thing is, all this is going to change after the tons of the restructure and revision that I’m currently working. What the heck. I’ll leave it up for now.
There is resonance here that won’t be felt due to the reader being unaware of the larger scope. There is also foreshadowing for things that happen one hundred pages later. However, this is one scene where there’s a tad bit of resolution, one of the few scenes that does not end with a cliff hanger.… Read more