Allen G. Bagby

Author of the Creed of Kings Saga

I Ain’t George R. R. Martin, but…

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I’ve written over a million words in the last few years about stories within this exotic world that I’ve been building called the Creed of Kings Saga. I’ve learned about a thousand lessons, many brutal. Some lessons seem impossible to learn, like not leaving words out. So much has been learned that is far more valuable than my seemingly inborn weaknesses and sins of the past such as not learning grammar better in school. Will I ever stop typing “where” when I mean “were”?

Blunt realizations ignite my desire to learn. Pains are felt at that moment but extend through the corrections of an epic saga. In the world of story-telling that pain is agonizing when you realize you have made a huge bungle. Nine months ago I sent the seventh revision to my editor. It’s a long, long road.

I crossed the finish line of my first epic fantasy  in 2010. As I started my first editing process ever, I was clueless. I had written a wilderness and every insignificant weed was known by a pretty sentence. Despite this, and to my pleasant surprise, some friends enjoyed part one of that epic. But this “finished” thing was huge with parts two and three. I had an epic inner conflict.

I felt it was too big and complicated to appeal to the masses from an unknown author. I felt lost and a bit depressed. Then I found Story Engineering by Larry Brooks. It changed everything. He became my wilderness guide, my Gandalf. I dove into his book and fully embraced his approach.

Brooks helped me discover why the portrait I wanted to paint looked more like Jack, of Jack in the Box instead of the Mona Lisa I had imagined. Though this was a brutal realization, it also renewed my confidence. Reading that book helped me grasp the talent I felt I had. I had a strong but dull blade of steel before Story Engineering helped me put grips and guards in the write place (pun intended) and sharpen the edge of my sword pen. Reading his book was like getting a wise coach for an epic test. I started afresh on editing the book I had “finished.” Then the next hard lesson came.

I had ignored the impact of Kindle and Nook on the publishing world in those early days of the e-book revolution. After previously swearing to never self-publish, because I thought it was vain and egotistical, I decided to give it a second thought. After lots of reading and inner debate, I decided on self-publishing. I swore I would not compromise on quality. I would not just fling it up on the wall and see what sticks. Along with that decision a lot of additional concerns surfaced, writer’s platform, hiring an editor, serious website, paying for a pro book cover etc. One virtually becomes the only employee of a mini publishing company.

I restarted with the intent of self-publishing a massive ongoing saga over a period of years. My new goal is to write shorter books. I reexamined the book I had “finished.” Opportunities were there for more books. It was 160,000 words. Too big! I swore to write a less complicated better story. With Larry’s book to guide me, renewed confidence and updated knowledge of self-publishing, I outlined Blood & Soul and two other follow-up books that preceded Creed of Kings (I’ve also outlined two books beyond Creed of Kings). In the spring of 2011 I began the initial writings of Blood & Soul and finished the seventh draft on September 15, 2013. It’s 159,493 words long!

I agonized over that word count. I didn’t know it was that long. The average word count on a novel is around 80K to 100K. Fantasy can be 100K to 120k. George R. R. Martin’s book Game of Thrones dwarfs mine. It’s a door stopper at 284K. But on many levels, I ain’t George!

In my defense, there are a lot of characters but not near as many as in Martin’s. Mine is an epic quest and return. It is the set-up for an epic I’ve titled Creed of Kings Saga. Martin’s Game of Thrones on Kindle downloads for $9.99. Blood & Soul will download for around $4.99 to $5.99. So, I only need to prove I’m half as good as Martin!

Blood & Soul will publish on July 11, 2014.

 

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  1. Anonymous

    I am in no ways a writer, but I have a few authors I read exclusively and can give a bit of a view of their works.

    Terry Brooks – Shannara fame. I read it first time when I was 14 because it had a Hildebrandt painting on it (of D&D and Dragon magazine fame) It was very wordy, but his first Trilogy had a lot to set up in this new fantasy world. But being a former lawyer, he’s a very very very detail oriented writer. Great character development as they trek through another leg of their quests….He’s still a great character writer. I find his stories are a bit repetitious now, but the endings are always a payoff… He spends the first 200 pages setting the cliff hanger or ending up. Yet I still buy first editions of his hardcover books every time….

    Don’t even get me started on the wordiness of Tolkien. People may throw stones, but you talk about hard books to keep my interest…but I have to remember he was one of the first in setting up a new fantasy world…

    Then there’s Ray Bradbury. The guy is a word alchemist. He can jam so much into one sentence…. But I found out later that most of his novels were all lengthened short stories. Farenheit 451 is actually the mash up of 3 stories and is still one of my favorite books of all time.The Martian Chronicles is just a collection of stories about Mars that are not linked together except for the planet they are about… Also, several short stories written over several years… Something Wicked This Way Comes… another novel inspired by several short stories about a Dark Carnival…etc

    Just my thoughts…. Read the forward to Bradbury’s Farenheit 451 anniversary edition or Terry Brooks Sometime The Magic Works (I’ve never read because it’s about writing not his characters….)

    Otherwise keep it up. Let as many as you can read it before you publish it to get their opinions I would think… Have people give their emotional reactions, not comparisions to other authors or previous worlds…. I for one read read Christopher Paolini’s first two books and really didn’t think they were that great but the potential was there for his creativity… A dragon picking it’s owner, that’s a new twist (for me at least)

    But maybe it doesn’t matter, because Brooks and Bradbury are pretty much the only writers I read. Only because I just don’t have as much time to read…. Plus I only have time for short stories sometimes, and Bradbury can entertain like nobody in that realm…

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